First post... Pain

In the community of respect, I shan't share whose pain this is, but please let me say... I feel their pain in my heart.

Haiku: written with pain...
1)...
BURST! Wide open gash
A soul trickles out sorrow
Spent and lifeless lay.

2)...
A tear fell today
A flood uncontrolled
BLOOD - a broken heart.

Renditions in my Journal.